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In the white air - IR by =C-Hass:iconC-Hass:

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Staring at the window facing the cold air.
We crossed the time one last time,
Don't go away I'm fine.
We had so many things to say
Why did you cannot stay
I knew it has to be so..
where da hell did you go?

Nosound - In the white air




My first Infrared photo.
I'm so proud of it.
Hoya R72 filter, 20 seconds exposure, f8, ISO100
Comments and faves are more than welcome.
Thank you!

The rest of the Infrared series [link]


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*Clangston Apr 13, 2009, 8:15:27 AM
The composition is about as near to perfect as a real scene can be.
The various lines and textures lead the eye around the picture in a most pleasing way.
Every detail, every shadow and every texture seems to have its place and role to play in the picture.
This is very much photography as art, and a very effective example of the artform.
If I was to suggest anything, it would be turning down the blue slightly, allowing the picture to darken as you do so. I would probably also increase the contrast, but again only slightly.
But that's just my personal taste, the picture is mighty fine just as it is.
Thank you.
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^kkart Apr 9, 2009, 7:59:30 AM
Very well done I have to say.

The top left with teh dark branch bothers me some, there is a lot of contrast there and it becomes a tangent. I would maybe crop that out.

Color and saturation are dead on the money, really a good exposure, I like the use of lines in this a lot, I almost want to see the bottom left come to a point, like a triangle. But that isn't possible. I like the angle and the use of perspective in this.

I think you pretty much nailed this shot myself, I can't really think of anything else that would better it.
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=CSnyder Apr 8, 2009, 8:55:04 AM
the ir does wonders for this, really stunning shot, amazing colors
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Mood: Joy ~DeviousClown Apr 8, 2009, 8:55:17 AM
it was worth all that wait :D
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*inObrAS Apr 8, 2009, 8:58:07 AM
Excellent work! :clap:
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=C-Hass Apr 8, 2009, 9:00:25 AM
Oh yes, it's a whole new world!
I'm very glad you like it Chris. Thank you!

--
And the lights turn them off my friend
And the ghosts..Well just let them in
Cause in the dark, It's easier... to see

Capturing time in a heartbeat [link]
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=C-Hass Apr 8, 2009, 9:00:50 AM
haha, the best is to come ;)

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And the lights turn them off my friend
And the ghosts..Well just let them in
Cause in the dark, It's easier... to see

Capturing time in a heartbeat [link]
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=C-Hass Apr 8, 2009, 9:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend :salute:

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And the lights turn them off my friend
And the ghosts..Well just let them in
Cause in the dark, It's easier... to see

Capturing time in a heartbeat [link]
:iconcsnyder:
=CSnyder Apr 8, 2009, 9:01:47 AM
for sure!
youre welcome
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=C-Hass Apr 8, 2009, 9:01:59 AM
This means so much coming from you.
This was my first shot.
better ones are coming.
Thank you !

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And the lights turn them off my friend
And the ghosts..Well just let them in
Cause in the dark, It's easier... to see

Capturing time in a heartbeat [link]
:iconthawthan:
~Thawthan Apr 8, 2009, 9:06:05 AM
:wow::faint:
Wow wow wow wow..

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Lights in the sky...
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